Too many incidental jokes -- the cod-piece/pee/philistines routines drown your basic premise in unrelated and contrived wordplay.Take another shot at it, but instead work your basic premise into substantive humor -- perhaps by establishing the idea of odd behaviors born of isolation, and then presenting us with some other odd behaviors that the world has not seen yet.Please have a revised version on my desk for Monday, and I'll reconsider your grade.B minus.
c3rb85Oct 25, 2009
Anyone know the translation in that part there?
jerseyslamOct 25, 2009
really?
andoruOct 25, 2009
What's that thing in her mouth NEXT to her upper teeth at 0:39?
humptydankOct 25, 2009
Too many incidental jokes -- the cod-piece/pee/philistines routines drown your basic premise in unrelated and contrived wordplay.Take another shot at it, but instead work your basic premise into substantive humor -- perhaps by establishing the idea of odd behaviors born of isolation, and then presenting us with some other odd behaviors that the world has not seen yet.Please have a revised version on my desk for Monday, and I'll reconsider your grade.B minus.
dande12Oct 25, 2009
Im not exactly sure whether that was philisophical or just insanity...probz insanity
azzurone89Oct 25, 2009
Dam...I was gonna say that!
andreoOct 25, 2009
She has nothing on the kielbasa queen...